[IndiChix] Draft mail - read and review

[Kadambari Devarajan]

On Mon, Jan 5, 2009 at 4:49 PM, <hassath at gmail.com> wrote:

>
> Hey Kadambari, thanks. Much appreciated.  (I myself am particular
> about such stuff. Missed these because there's been so much list
> mail...)
>
> Would you please go ahead and make those changes (and correct any
> other such minor errors) in the draft and send it again here? That
> would be great.
>

How about this:

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Hello Swati.

It's been a while since you've been on the list, and about a year
since you have unsubscribed from the list and moved on. We wish you
success with whatever else you are doing now.

Some others (old and new) on the list are active though, and various list
members have varied interests. Some interests are related to
evangelism and support which are going on in various forms. Others
include handling administrative issues involved with
running a user group. Some of us have felt the need for active members
to be owners and admins of the domain name. We realize that you have
registered the domain name, and that you have renewed it recently as
well. Would it be possible for you to transfer the domain name
ownership to the active list members, please ? We, of course, offer to
reimburse the domain registration fee that you would have just paid to
renew the domain. Could you let us know the paid amount?

Given the disconnected nature of email, we feel it prudent to clarify
that this is not a demand, but a request, since we recognize that you
have purchased the domain and have paid for the renewal as well. We're
asking simply as community members, and are basing our request on the
principle of active enthusiasts who wish to be caretakers.

We have tried to contact your earlier at swati at sanisoft.com since that
was known to us to be your email address. However, not having received
a response to our earlier mails, we decided to send this mail to the
email address mentioned at your business site as well, in the
assumption that you would be receiving those emails.

Do let us know your thoughts on transferring the domain name. We would
like to take a decision amongst ourselves on this matter, and hope to
receive a response by the 15th of Jan 2009.

Looking forward to hearing from you, and wishing you all the best,

-- Gayathri/Hassath/Vid
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I've just incorporated the edits.

Cheers,
Kadambari Devarajan

PS - To-do: Include a few lines on why a transfer is required, if necessary.
My apologies for a mail that looks so messy!

-- 
Check out my blog at
http://kadambarid.livejournal.com
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